Plot/Story
Finally, I have the story planned out. Here is how it goes...
Rosa Pastel has self-esteem issues. She's slightly overweight
and everyone at school teases her because of it, even her mother
tells her she needs to lose weight.
On her 16th birthday, she receives a pair of earrings from
her estrange grandfather. She looks at them more closely,
they're strawberry shaped earrings! That same night,
Rosa's younger sibling, Diamante, is kidnapped by a
mysterious figure who claims to be " pure evil ".
Rosa undertakes the quest in saving her sister and comes to discover the
purpose of her earrings.
And That's the story so far.
what would the underlying message be, the theme?
ReplyDeleteLore I liked your previous short story children's book you presented in Dale's class, so I know you produce good work. Honestly though, I don't see how everything ties together. You should provide more detail of your plot and how everything is going to come together. It's too broad of a preview; you should tell us how her earings have to do with her sister being kidnapped. Overall I like what you plan to create, I think your good at what you do; I just suggest you explain a little more.
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